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Untitled Lovesick Stuff Num. 1 by ~darkwurm:icondarkwurm:



Having found you,
the greatest thing possible,
morning sky bluer than it ever was,
the wind, offering more comfort than ever,
smell of the rain, more refreshing that it ever was,
stars, infinite in the sky,
brighter than I ever though possible,
pain,
no different than pleasure,
pleasure no different than pain.

Your kiss,
the greatest thing possible,
strawberries, never so sweet,
wine, never so refreshing,
the sun, offering more comfort than ever,
smell of flowers, more potent in their fragrance than they ever were,
moon, indescribable in its beauty,
brighter than I ever thought possible
pleasure,
no different than pain,
pain no different than pleasure.

Having lost you,
the worst thing imaginable,
morning sky darker than blackest of nights,
the wind, no comfort found here, more cold and callous than ever,
stars, not one I see,
their beauty more lost on me than I ever thought possible,
pain,
no pleasure to ever be found,
pleasure lost to the blackened void of sorrow.

You picture,
the most torturous thing possible,
nothing is sweet, and wont be ever again,
wine, never so refreshing,
the sun, offering more pain than ever,
smell of flowers, a reminder of the torture,
moon, offering no solace,
no relief,
no beauty to be had,
pleasure,
un-allowed, uninvited,
unwanted.
©2007-2009 ~darkwurm
:icondarkwurm:

Author's Comments

Fairly self exclamatory, its more of that love sickness stuff, for which I have been known to write over the years. This one has been sitting around for a while waiting for me to finish the thought. I realized, its as done as its ever going to get. Its fairly rough, and frankly I'm not a fan of form based poetry, so you get what you get.

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:iconpoetess:
rekindles my heart just by reading this. I'm so couped up with other things... it's hard to feel.

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:icondarkwurm:
Mmmmmmm Yeah I know how that is for sure. Gotta "stop and smell the roses" once and a while to feel somewhat human though, glad it was of some use. =)

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Dark and Jaded
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:) Thank you for writing this.

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July 25, 2007
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